‘System’ -Joey Script
0:00 – 0:01 – Extreme close up of officer. “Attention”
0:01 – 0:02 – Shots of cast standing in line
0:02 – 0:05 – Shots of cast standing in line ”Stand at ease”
0:05 – 0:10 – Collective shots of different locations (briefly explaining storyline)
0:10 – 0-19 - More shots of army (marching feet and panning shot of faces)
0:19 – 0:20 – Jump cut to reveal Joe in a line up
0:20 – 0:26 - Joe starts rapping (frantic hand gestures and track backwards)
0:26 – 0:27 – Medium long shot of Joe breaking out of line (starts to run)
0:27 – 0:31 – Continued Surveillance shot of Joe running
0:31 – 0:35 – Performing to the surveillance camera/system (then runs off screen)
0:35 – 0:37 – Close up of someone else in the ‘system’ lip syncs ‘how typical same old system’
0:37- 0:39 - Medium close shot of officer shows a picture of Joe. Other officer lip syncs, “he already left just missed him”
0:39 – 0:43 – running away performing.
0:43 – 0:51- Joe in the foreground rapping with everyone in the background. At 0.43 “Scream. Monster” people in background make demented/scary faces. (Shake camera)
At 0.51 “say you wanna have me for lunch. Anaconda” Queue tracking shot towards Joe (scary smile) -> invisible cut.
0:51 – 0:58 – performing to the camera (Basement shot)
0:58 – 1:05 – tracking shot of Joe running
1:05 – 1.07 – collective shots of other people breaking the system
1.07 – 1:13 – Joe looks up to camera as he’s escaping (camera follows his eyes to reveal surveillance camera). Switch to high angle shot from surveillance point of view ->(invisible cut) switch to computer screen track outwards to over shoulder shot of officer looking at him on cameras.
1:13 – 1:21 - Track forward over the shoulder to a different computer screen, which shows a medium shot of Joe rapping. Zoom towards his face of him performing.
1:21 – 1:22 – Joe performing to surveillance camera
1:22 – 1:24 – extreme close up of people lip-syncing
1:24 – 1:28 – jump cut back to Joe performing to surveillance camera - “You can do it on your own don’t sit on my lap” On ‘lap’ Joe slaps the camera.
1:28 - 1:29 - Screen in surveillance room goes fuzzy
1:29 – 1:36 – broken shots of officer running into boardroom (8) explaining Joe is gone. Close up of faces “...or you can just dance” queue - Extreme close up of hand slamming down
1:36 – 1:38 – jump cut to people in black dancing.
1:38 – 1:40 – cut to people jumping down from buildings
1:40 – 1:43 – jump cut to line up in basement.
1:43 – 1:45 – Cut to people free running (officers chasing)
1:45 – 1:48 – Joe performance shot at bus garage
1:48 – 1:52 – Broken cuts of Brianne and Joe running
1:52 - 1:54 – extreme close up of lip-syncing “long time high jack”
1:54 – 1:55 – jump cut to boardroom officer giving orders to find Joe
1:55 – 1:57 – broken cuts of officer going back to surveillance room -> zoom into screen (try to find Joe)
1:57 - 1:59 – Officer on walkie-talkie points finger camera follows finger into screen
1:59 – 2:01 –Broken shots of sunset (4)
2:01 – 2:03 – dispersed people and Joe come together outside unicorn building on ‘relevant’
2:03 – 2:05 – Joe and other people run up stairs of building to a room with ‘System’ documents in
2:05 – 2:07 – close up of Joe taking documents titled “System” on ‘…evidence’
2:07 – 2:11 – Performance shot of Joe in basement
2:11 – 2:15 – on ‘…dance’ group behind Joe start dancing
2:15 – 2:18 – Joe holding up ‘system’ papers to camera with relevant actions to “why’d you make these systems lay these laws and say who’s in them”
2:18 – 2:22 – cut to shot of people dancing
2:22 – 2:24 – extreme close up of Joe performing
2:24 – 2:26 – Medium shot of surveillance room and all the cameras looking for Joe
2:26 – 2:30 – cut to Joe performing to camera
2:30 – 2:33 – medium close up of random people lip-syncing
2:33 – 2:37 – Joe – performance
2:37 – 2:39 – cut to group of officers running after Joe
2:39 - 2:41 – medium close up of Joe’s feet running
2:41 – 2:45 – Joe running towards and past camera. Cut to officers running in same direction
2:45 – 2:53 – Joe runs into basement towards end. Turns around and smiles. (Light flickers on and off) when light comes back on Joe is gone
2:53 – 2:57 – officers run into basement thinking Joe is there. To find that he isn’t, officers act baffled
2:57 -3:12 – switch between broken shots of Joe walking away with group down alleyway with duffle bags and shot of Joe on his own walking away with duffle bag